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Feel This Fire by ~Bloodrunner:iconBloodrunner:

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Feel This Fire.

(c) Kyle W. Griffin.

You! Why don't you listen?
(When I say that I'm unable?)
Would you stand behind me?
(Knowing I'm so unstable.)
I'm lost inside my mind.
(Oh God, a twisted fable!)
I might seem strong on the outside...
(But inside, I am disabled!)

Not my fault, the way things transpire.
I'm lost, inside this fire.
Scorching, screaming, in a blaze,
It all disappears into a haze, yea....

Me! Am I this broken?
(When I say that I'm unable?)
It all too much to handle!
(Knowing I'm so unstable.)
Can you help save me from madness...?
(Oh God, a twisted fable!)
All I can do is try...
(But inside, I am disabled!)

What's the line between reality
And what's real?
The's limits are fading, happiness
I cannot feel!
Please help me warm my heart,
It's as cold as steel!
Start the fire inside me,
Please, god, let me feel!

The fire!
Desire!
Washing over me!
The fire!
Inspire!
Me to open my eyes and see!
The fire!
My sire!
My savior, reaching out to me!

It burns! It hurts!
I'll carry on through the pain....
It hurts! It kills!
But I don't give up that easy....
Oh God! Just help me!
No, I'll open my own eyes to see!
Irate! Insane!
The rain, as it pours over me, yea!

Yea....
©2008-2010 ~Bloodrunner
:iconbloodrunner:

Author's Comments

My venting, I had to let out.

No, it's not my best, no, it's not perfect, but I'll probably comebackand fix it later. I think it has potential.

(c)Kyle W. Griffin.

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~TehRaBbIt Jul 14, 2008, 8:21:47 PM
very nice!
should create a band and just sing it out.

--
i use my kahonas.
:iconbloodrunner:
~Bloodrunner Jul 16, 2008, 2:48:27 PM
I may.

Who knows.

--
One thing, I don't know how,

Doesn't even matter how you look at it now.

I am me, I am new,

I got this way by getting over you.
:iconmyobsessiveromance:
~MyObsessiveRomance Jul 16, 2008, 10:25:57 PM
I like it! It almost sounds like a song.

--
They say men are jumping out of windows in Dallas and Chicago and New York City, too. Wouldn't be surprised. I'd jump out a damn window too if I had one to jump out of...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Fall in love? Nah. I'd rather fall in chocolate.
:iconbloodrunner:
~Bloodrunner Jul 23, 2008, 5:55:12 PM
Actually, I wrote it to be one.

though I have to fix it. I went and re-did the last verses.

--
One thing, I don't know how,

Doesn't even matter how you look at it now.

I am me, I am new,

I got this way by getting over you.
:iconmyobsessiveromance:
~MyObsessiveRomance Jul 26, 2008, 11:31:31 PM
Oh well I'm sorry. How silly of me...I should of realized it was one. Its very well written by the way.

--
They say men are jumping out of windows in Dallas and Chicago and New York City, too. Wouldn't be surprised. I'd jump out a damn window too if I had one to jump out of...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Fall in love? Nah. I'd rather fall in chocolate.
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